The Word Stop - 4 - ABHORRENT

I write poetry for teenagers to? help them to learn english, but I'm russian speaker Can anybody to help me? Are there mistakes in my english text ? thank much And every time you're down just take a look about the sun will rise again in spite of shine or rain And when you're falling down just try to hold your ground to overcome yourself for sure you'll get success exactly get success

thank you very much for your useful lessons?

I really appreciate this serie?

I find my aunt's daughter abhorrent. She's ungrateful for what my parents and I do for her. She thinks I'm a parasite on her mother while it's her and my aunt who almost live on my parents' little profit-they suck my parents' blood till the last drop, they insult me everyday, they live in richness like royal whores while my parents work hard, spend little to give me money for my high-school years....no, for those bastards' expensive hobbies!!!! (Sorry for my? unrelating comment) :((

Thank you duncaninchina. More of these words are like french words?

misterduncan im waiting for? the lesson 74 :)

My neighbours? are so abhorrent as to generate noise very often.

It's abhorrent when some people wanna learn english? and study in youtube but never found the mr ducan videos...

From a not English teacher to Mr Duncan .... The greatest ! Lol . I lke very much your lessons ! You should come in France to teach? this very beautefull language that is English ! Thank you so much !

Glad to see u again in this Word Stop 4.Thank? you and see u soon.